How to Make an Editor Happy

by Steve Zurier on March 24, 2011

Times are tough for freelance writers, so you need every edge to secure work and maintain good relationships with your clients.

This is especially important in a custom media environment, where many magazines operate with a small staff. Editors have to know their writers will hit the mark every time. Deadlines are always fast-approaching and there is precious little time for extensive rewrites.

Based on my experiences working with dozens of freelance writers over the years, here are some steps you can take to keep yourself working:  

Keep on pitching.

Instead of thinking of editors as impregnable forces, think of them as people with problems who really need writers who can deliver on time and write clean copy that services your readership. After the dotcom bust in the early 2000s I decided to do some freelance music writing, something I always wanted to do, but never had the time for because I’ve always needed full-time jobs with medical benefits. I’m an upright bass player, so I found a bass magazine in London and pitched the editor three stories.

Each pitch was carefully targeted to the magazine’s readership of professional bassists. To make a long story short, one of my pitches succeeded and I wrote for DoubleBassist magazine for several months during my search for a new job. I had no real experience writing for this audience (serious orchestral and jazz bassists), but I simply decided that the editor would appreciate well-formed pitches delivered in an easy-to-digest manner. Too many writers just wait for the next assignment to be handed out. If you’re waiting a long time, your editor is telling you something.

Use quotes sparingly.

So many stories that are handed in to me are strings of quotes with no transitions. I also get lots of fragments of quotes and quotes that mean nothing like the new IT system “is a big deal” for our university. So what. I edit a magazine targeted to IT managers at colleges and universities. Tell me why the IT system is improving productivity and making teaching and learning more effective on college campuses, that’s what I’m looking for.

If you plan to use a quote, make it accentuate the main point of the story. Look at newspapers and magazines you trust and I’m sure there won’t be many quote fragments in their copy. What I object to is the lazy writing. Best to paraphrase if there’s a question in your mind about a quote.

Carefully review any documents that your editor sends back.

This is important. When an editor sends back a document, he or she is dropping hints as to what they want a finished document to look like. Next time an editor sends you back a document with queries, look over the formatting carefully. See how they set heads and decks. See if captions are included or web links. The links can be important, especially if the story will run online. Next time you hand in a story, try to make the document look similar to the one your editor sent back to you the time before. They will appreciate that you are trying to match the magazine or newspaper’s style.

Learn the publication’s billing system.

While there are certainly some editors who are hardnosed about payments, most are fair and want to maintain good relations with their writers. That means it’s in the editor’s best interests to see that you get paid on time. Most organizations have a Net 30 Day policy and ask that you submit a purchase order number with your invoice.

Today, more and more companies have automated purchasing systems where writers will get purchase orders sent to them as PDFs in e-mail. Find out how the publication operates and try to avoid duplicate work. Your editor will appreciate that you’ve taken the time to learn his or her system.

 

Steve Zurier

Written by: Steve Zurier

Steve is a Managing Editor at TMG. He has more than 30 years of experience in journalism and publishing, most of it covering technology.

  • Melanie Powers

    I so agree about “use quotes sparingly.” Whether the writer intended it or not, I always think the writer was being lazy in those instances. Many people can transcribe an interview, stick a lead on it and call it a story. I want writers who will actually WRITE. I love the anticipation of getting a story from a writer to see what they’ve done, and it’s so disappointing when you realize he/she just phoned it in.

    I also love your tip about carefully reviewing the documents editors send back. I think this is good business sense and customer service to your editor. I’m always surprised when I receive articles that don’t even have a story slug or the writer’s byline, but start directly with the body copy. I tried a new freelancer recently and she wrote great subheads and suggested a creative headline and dek, too, in addition to her well-written story. You bet I’ll use her again.

  • http://engage.tmgcustommedia.com Andi Gabrick

    Fantastic post, Steve! I think there could be a few more parts to this post, actually; maybe you should make it a series. I think the point you make that resonates with me the most (aside from the quotes part, which an old editor of mine used to refer to as the “string of pearls” method of writing) is about *carefully* reviewing the document the editor sends back. Go over it once, maybe twice to see the overall message the editor is trying to convey, then start addressing the queries. Don’t just jump in and start answering the questions directly. Consider context, feel free to rework it some now that there’s new info. In a nutshell, be thoughtful. Please.

    • http://www.tmgcustommedia.com Steve Zurier

      Thanks for the commentary. Keep them coming!!!!

  • Sandra Gittlen

    I think one thing missing from this is asking for samples of what the editor thinks is the type of writing that best exemplifies the publication or what he/she sees as great writing — this offers a lot of insight. Or request a publication style guide. That way, you can avoid some issues later.

  • http://www.tmgcustommedia.com Steve Zurier

    Thanks for the post Sandy. Here are some stories that I’ve really liked that have run in EdTech: Focus on Higher Education in the past year. As for examples of great magazine writing. I’ve always loved the non-fiction in magazines like The New Yorker and The Atlantic Monthly. May be more instructive to read the following stories though, since they apply to our work on EdTech and the other books:

    http://www.edtechmag.com/higher/january-february-2010/going-global-3.html

    http://www.edtechmag.com/higher/march-april-2011/videos-new-world-order.html

    http://www.edtechmag.com/higher/march-april-2011/true-believers.html

    http://www.edtechmag.com/higher/november-december-2010/blades-of-glory-3.html

  • Melanie Powers

    @Sandra, that’s a great addition. If I email new writers article web links, I like to also mail them print copies of the magazine so they can get a sense of the look and feel of the entire magazine, not just the tone of a few separate articles or solely the web presence.

    @Steve, I’ll check out those links. It’s always fun to see what other editors are working on.

  • http://www.wordkitchen.net Amy Rogers Nazarov

    Hi Steve: This is a great and concise summation of a few easy things writers ought to do as a matter of course. And, your comment about not overusing quotes was really timely. Half an hour ago, I finished a piece for my alumni magazine, the subject of which was an incredibly quotable woman who tossed off these perfect, lyrical lines all through our interview (at one point she talked about how journaling “was a way out of the forest of trees cancer throws up around you). It was a struggle to pick just the right one (well, two), but I enjoyed the satisfaction of watching the quote advance the story (which had to be written super tight) and illuminate something about my subject’s style and personality. A great interviewee sure makes our jobs as writers easier!

  • http://www.tmgcustommedia.com Steve Zurier

    Music to my ears amy, thanks for the comments.

  • http://www.tmgcustommedia.com Steve Zurier

    Sandy Gittlen also asked me to show examples of stories that I liked. My first response was to go stuffy and mention the non-fiction in the New Yorker and Atlantic Monthly. I also read Jazz Times Magazine and Bass Magazine, and here’s a link to a Washington Post Sunday Magazine story that’s a music story, but also a great human interest story about a group of musicians who make it a point to play for people who can’t normally afford or wouldn’t have access to live music. Feel free to post stories you liked or just think are great writing:

    http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2011/01/07/AR2011010704495.html

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